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All Deviations
All Deviations


Laying beneath you, I can see no more
Raining on my heart it beats no more
I cannot wait another day
My end has come and must now go
For I have lost all and left so soon
Goodbye all I love, remember me not
Leave my name with no sadness bearing
Goodbye to all I cease to be
Goodbye to breath, goodbye to life
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Submitted: May 25
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Didnt know what other catagory to put this under cuz actually this piece is not meant to be sad. Its a goodbye to everyone that this person knows. Lots of ppl say they never got to say goodbye to someone they loved, well these r the words from the person who died (at least 1 view of it)
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~SedahLiah:iconSedahLiah: May 25, 2008, 2:30:16 PM
Reminds me of the poem by John Donne, "A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning", which is basically a farewell telling the people you love not to be sad. Good job.

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Life lives for Death's love.
~DeathsShadow13:iconDeathsShadow13: May 26, 2008, 1:40:46 PM
i checked out that poem it was awsome. i admit it took a lil bit to understand it cuz first time reading it was like it wasnt in english. but i got it now

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"We wear them with pride, never forgetting the choices we have made"

"It abducts personality, consuming the essence of self while leaving the physical proof of self behind"
- Amanda Fortini describing Alzhiemer's

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